Beautiful thoughts, Pete. A fitting meditation for this time of year.
I couldn’t help noticing a couple of places where you apparently made changes and didn’t delete a word or two. (I’ve done that, too.) They were a minor distraction, but this poem is too good for English teachers like me to be distracted from. 🙄 You might want to proofread and tweak (And feel free to delete this comment when you have. 😉)
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed my little poem. I may release a third collection of verse next year with this included. Still thinking through a theme and what to include. Blessings
Beautiful thoughts, Pete. A fitting meditation for this time of year.
I couldn’t help noticing a couple of places where you apparently made changes and didn’t delete a word or two. (I’ve done that, too.) They were a minor distraction, but this poem is too good for English teachers like me to be distracted from. 🙄 You might want to proofread and tweak (And feel free to delete this comment when you have. 😉)
Thanks and I’ll check. Yes I appreciate an English teacher’s help now and then.
Yes this went through multiple revisions and I did find a straggler in the summer verse. Thanks again!
I love this walk through the seasons in verse.
Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed my little poem. I may release a third collection of verse next year with this included. Still thinking through a theme and what to include. Blessings
There are four seasons songs, pictures, etc., but this poem is one of the best I’ve read or seen. It’s beautiful and meaningful. Thank you, Pete.
So appreciate this from you. Glad to know this little verse has touched others.