Editing Advice from the Orchard – Part 1

Know this, my beloved brothers: let every person be quick to hear, slow to speak, slow to anger. James 1:19 ESV

Though there are libraries filled with books, college courses and seminars on how to edit, strangely enough, I learned some of the best pointers on the subject from the apple orchard. After many Winters of frozen fingers and toes, while pruning those trees it felt like I was getting to know some of them on a first name basis! Now, back in those days I wasn’t doing much of the “be quick to hear” stuff, but as I have grown older, I am beginning to remember things spoken to me years ago. These words of wisdom that God was trying to tell me in the orchard, apply as much to life as to writing, So, even if you don’t fancy yourself an author, these just might help you find the path that He has laid out for you as well.

Clear Away those Suckers!

Both editing and pruning begin as process of organizing. When I start to trim an apple tree, I don’t just wade into it with a chain saw, slicing here and hacking away there. No! Instead, a person has to begin by clearing away the sucker growth. For the uninitiated, sucker growth means those long straight stems that shoot up both from the trunk as well as the tops of trees during the Summer. You see that sucker growth looks great, because it is tall and strong, but it will never bear fruit. Instead, just as their name implies, they suck the strength away from the rest of the tree. Sucker growth, in our life and writing is when we are trying too hard and saying too much. In writing, suckers look like crowds of adjectives or unnecessary rabbit trails leading readers down paths of our personal pet peeves. Sometimes suckers come in the form of fifty-dollar words, we toss in, hoping folks will see how brilliant we are. If left unchecked, these guys will grow taller and taller, but they won’t yield a single piece of fruit. What we should be looking for are the branches called fruitwood. Fruitwood looks old and gnarly, but it is filled with healthy buds, that burst into white and pink blossoms in the Springtime. As trimmers, our job is to eliminate anything that steals the air flow and sunshine from the mature fruitwood. Trimming out the clutter in our manuscript or in our daily life, might feel as if we are oversimplifying, but if we want our readers to taste the fruit of the ideas we are trying to communicate, we must not be afraid to ruthlessly cut back everything that draws away attention from the heart of our story and puts the focus on us, instead of on Jesus. So, if you are ready for a new year and a new perspective, then grab those pruning tools, put on your coat and a warm pair of gloves and let’s go out into the orchard and get to work!

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Love in Action

‭‭But I have this against you, that you have abandoned the love you had at first. Remember therefore from where you have fallen; repent, and do the works you did at first. If not, I will come to you and remove your lampstand from its place, unless you repent. Revelation 2:4-5a ESV

Notice that the first love that Jesus calls us to is not about how we feel. He is calling us to repent and then do something! Though our feelings often reflect our inner motives, even those motives are only useful, if they lead to our actions. When our focus is on how we feel about Jesus, then we end up in a fairly useless state of feeling guilty and ashamed. But the good news is that He gives us opportunities to serve him every day. He isn’t asking us to feel anything. He is calling us to go find someone with dirty feet, and show them the love of Jesus by washing them. Then those pesky feelings just might follow! So, as we enter this New Year, let’s determine to start showing the love of Jesus to the world by washing one dirty foot at a time!

In the Silence

And in the same region there were shepherds out in the field, keeping watch over their flock by night. 
Luke 2:8 ESV

Have you ever wondered why God sometimes requires our silence? When I was small, my parents had a dinner table rule, “Children were to be seen and not heard!” Today, I realize that it was because they needed time to talk with each other after a busy day, but at the time I hated it! It felt like my mom and stepdad were only interested in themselves, and that we kids were second class citizens. So, when God asks for our silence, we might feel the same way, but it isn’t true. God is looking for us to be quiet so that He can tell us what is on His heart.

In fat, it was on that first Christmas, that God came in a moment of quietness to shepherds, who were watching their sheep. When God broke their silence, it was with the message of “Good news of great joy, that will be for all people!” In the darkness and the silence, God came to show us all, that He: the Good Shepherd, was watching over us, His sleeping sheep. Today, He invites us to come into His presence, in Heaven, where we will never be silent again, but there we will worship Him with shouts of praise for all eternity!

“In the holy hush of dawn – I hear a voice
I am with you all the day – Rejoice! Rejoice!”
L. B. Cowman - Streams in the Desert November 28