Editing Advice from the Orchard – part 2 – Cut Out That Deadwood!


I am the true vine, and My Father is the vinedresser. Every branch in Me that does not bear fruit He takes away; and every branch that bears fruit He prunes, that it may bear more fruit. John 15:1-2 NKJV

Pruning is essential to our writing as well as our lives. Jesus tells us that the master pruner is our Father in Heaven and His pruning as well as our editing is a step-by-step process. In part one we talked about clearing out the sucker growth of overblown verbiage. Today, we come to our next group of compositional ne’er-do-wells called: dead branches. Since pruning in the orchard is done in Winter, first-time trimmers logically ask, “How can you tell which branches are dead, when there aren’t any leaves?” Finding out which are living requires getting close enough to take hold of them. Grabbing on to a live branch you will discover that it is flexible, while dead twigs snap off at the touch of our fingers. In the same way our dead branches in writing as well as our lives, are rigid and dry. When people get close enough to touch them, these dead phrases and dried up ideas make no living connections to our readers. They are like low-calorie deserts, that look scrumptious in the commercials, but artificial sweeteners in snack cakes and as well as sentences leave a bitter aftertaste, and no one will want to go back for a second helping!

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In the orchard, deadwood removal looks brutal when the ground is littered with piles of branches. But cutting those limbs out is vital to the health of the trees. If they remain, they will crowd out the good branches and invite insects and disease to infect the trees. But once they are gone, there will be more space for the healthy branches, and even the tiniest healthy bud has a great advantage over the largest dead limb: it is still alive! Some dead limbs in our lives as well as our manuscripts are so large that a chain saw must be used to cut them out. If the trees in the orchard could talk, I am sure that they would complain loudly while I was removing their sucker growth and deadwood. But in April, the trees that have been pruned will fill with leaves, in May they will be covered with pink blossoms and if you come back in the Fall, you will find them heavy with delicious fruit!

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4 thoughts on “Editing Advice from the Orchard – part 2 – Cut Out That Deadwood!

  1. One thing you didn’t mention, Pete, is that sometimes writers aren’t so adept at pruning their own dead wood and sucker growth. It can be difficult to hand your “baby “ (article, book chapter) over to a trusted editor, but it’s often essential.

    • And we are all different. It takes me 2-3 hours to churn out 200-300 hundred words of fairly clean copy. So if I had wanted to write, War and Peace,” I would have needed to begin 20 years ago!

  2. In reading this post the thought came to me of climbing a tree and reaching for a dead branch. It breaks and causes the person to fall. Such is dead wood in life if it is not trimmed. It can’t support and offer shade like in Mark 4:30-32.

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